Outside my bedroom window
I watch as rich golden leaves
Meander slowly from the tree
Marking the passing of days
Until my autumn leave.
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Len Moriarty 
I love your use of double meanings to make fall feel fleeting.
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Thank you 🙂 I’m moving in a few days because I’m going back to college and it just got me thinking, and then I came up with the poem 🙂
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Inspirational poems from life moments are always soul enlightening. Make us feel your understanding more than just thinking it.
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Beautiful. 😍
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I love the title. Double entendres.
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Wonderful piece. Great ending.
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Thank you!
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Really nice!! A poem of five lines leaves the autumn leaves hanging on the back of my mind. 🙂
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Thanks H 🙂 (also, welcome to wordpress 😛 )
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Great Poem, Autumn is my Favorite time of year…not too hot, not too cold, Beautiful colors, and Meals from summer harvest. Keep up the Great work you do! You are very talented, and you have been Heard!
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Thank you for liking my poem Hell, on my blog WordMusic. I hope you avoid all the million kinds of hell in your life.
Brent Kincaid
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a beautiful observation of Autumn falling… meander is one of my favorite words 🙂
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Thank you 🙂 I must admit I tend to use ‘meander’ a lot, I just love how it sounds!
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you are most welcome…i use it quite a bit, too 🙂
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